Okay, so for English we had to do a powerpoint about four poems, and we had to be original. So for my ‘Personal Comment’, I did video interpretations of the four poems.
And here they are (remember I can’t draw)
And what are people’s thoughts on the kirby picture at the end? Good? Bad? Your thoughts?
Duration : 0:2:35
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July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
haha quite funny …
haha quite funny actually, thanks, helped me with the understanding of the poems a little (:
xx
July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
omg i know wt i’am …
omg i know wt i’am going through revising these peoms and others like affliction of margaret, patrolling barnegat etc man i hate them i can’t wait until i finish my exams and burn my anthology and after so much finalllly college
July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
1. the light wasn’t …
1. the light wasn’t in the poem, nor was the drink, or the tornado, and whether the storm did any damage or not is up to the reader
2. That one we agree is rather pointless but so are all of Clarke’s poems (you should see the one about a sheep giving birth!)
3. That’s a man, he’s skipping, and he’s doing it because he loves nature
4. That was Chloé’s idea, and it’s hard to think of a plot for a poem that’s only six lines long
July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
Well, I edited them …
Well, I edited them a bit to ridicule them slightly, but the Armitage/Duffy poems are even stranger!
‘Today I’m going to kill something’
‘I stole a snowman once’
what is up with those?
and two of these were pre-1914 anyway!
July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
Most of these poems …
Most of these poems seem pointless.
As in there is a man looking at his drink and some light comes on and a storm comes but no damage was done.
Then Some woman making some story up.
Then Another woman in a field doing nothing.
Then an eagle jumping and falling.
Completely pointless.
The Armitage/Duffy/1914 ones are much better and have a point to it…
Like Havisham – and – Those Bastards in their mansions.
July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
A few days, it …
A few days, it didn’t help I made two videos for Storm on the Island. The first one was rubbish…
July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
I remember these. …
I remember these. That was a fun english presentation.
July 7th, 2010 at 8:19 am
Nice, must have …
Nice, must have taken ages to make.